Clarity Over Clever
Corey Quinn
Founder, Deep Specialization™
Just because it's obvious to us doesn't mean our buyers will make the connection. Learn why plain language and real results beat clever wording and process talk.
Just because it's obvious to us doesn't mean our buyers will make the connection.
That's why it's so important to spell it out for them.
Don't Use:
- Clever language
- Cloudy vagueness
- Inflated adjectives
- Your process to convey value
Do Use:
- Plain language
- Clear specifics
- Data
- Your results to convey value
Frequently Asked Questions
Why doesn't obvious value automatically get recognized by buyers?
Because what seems clear from the inside, having built the product or service, often isn't nearly as obvious to someone encountering it for the first time. Spelling out the connection explicitly is necessary rather than assuming it will be understood.
Why does clever language often fail to communicate real value?
Because cleverness can prioritize sounding impressive over being clear, leaving buyers to work harder than necessary to understand what's actually being offered.
Why does describing a process instead of results fail to convey value effectively?
Because buyers care more about the outcome they'll get than the mechanics of how it's produced. Leading with process details risks losing their attention before the actual value comes through.
What should replace inflated adjectives and vague language when communicating value?
Plain language, clear specifics, and real data, all of which make the actual value obvious and verifiable rather than relying on buyers to infer meaning from vague or exaggerated claims.
Why does leading with results instead of process better convey value to buyers?
Because results speak directly to what a buyer actually cares about, the outcome, rather than requiring them to translate a described process into what that would actually mean for their own situation.
About Corey Quinn
Founder, Deep Specialization™
Corey helps founder-led agencies scale through Deep Specialization™ and programmatic M&A. Former CMO of Scorpion ($20M to $200M). Author of "Anyone, Not Everyone."
